Most likely stolen
This sounds VERY familiar. People should look at the anime series Noir. I saw that once, and I am 99% positive you stole this from there. I will be notifying a moderator of my suspicions.
Oh great! I wonder if you are the last guy...
First you say something about this someone else´s work and now that you realize it doesnt belong to someone else you are saying this is from some serie.
What´s coming next? Next time It´ll be a movie theme?
On the top of the "morning light" high note it sounded like you ran out of air. If singing is anything like saxophone, push through it! Then again, as a sax player, I def. can't sing that well in the first place -.-""
I really liked this groove and use of effect. Nice choice of violin, fits the sound really well.
As far as performance, nothing much sylistically. It might just be the recording, but I'd bring out beats 2 and 4 on guitar accents and on snare a little more, might help it lay back a bit more. Just a little bit, it sounds like it loses energy when you're going quiet again. Around 1:10 in the music the bass is coming through a bit too sharp, you might want to try and dampen/soften it a little bit more if you can.
If you want to add a little jazz in there, when the bass plays on the offbeats you can try and mimic the feel in the drums. I don't know if that will sound better or not, just something to try.
Again, just trying to be helpful, I did like it a lot. Definatey some talent.
hey thanks for the taking the time to review, we'll take your suggestions into account when remixing it
A little too one-color
I liked a lot of things in balance (though sometimes it was a little sweep heavy). It's not bad, but it got a little repetitive, like it never moved on in idea.
I guess, it just felt a lot like "stomp, stomp, stomp, stomp, stomp" and after a while, it took away from the other textures. I think you have something good here, but if you go back and add in a bridge to break up the "stompy stompy," people will find it more interesting.
thanks for your ideas and i might do that and a bridge...hummm good idea im kinda working on something big right now so i won't get to is right away.
This is a good idea, add more! Balance is near perfect.
I agree, I am currently working on an extended version, aiming for a couple minutes. It will take some time though, I don't want it to be too repetetive and I also don't want to lose the balance and harmony it currently has.
Me likey. Doesn't matter if you start out slow if it's interesting. A little cliche, but well done none the less.
lol i know what ya mean, thanks for the review though, hope you like my other songs
Not bad, but a little bit familiar...
A little to generic for my taste (but that's personal). That aside, you should come out with a stronger statement at first. Again... it's well done, it just feels a little to... *god I hate this description myself* pedestrian.
Thanks for the review. This was my first venture into making something fully techno, so I know it's kinda generic. However, I would appreciate some more input on how to make it not so 'pedestrian' (I'm not sure what you mean by that) so that I can bring better music to y'all. Thanks again.
Nothing wrong with this submission, I enjoyed it. I didn't think it as pronounced as it could have been. In other words, the themes could have been a little stronger (even coasting things have to be strong). I will admit, though, that relaxed is harder to get right than anything else. Good stuff regardless.
i was stuck on this one for a bit, didn't really know where to take it. thanks for the review!
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